Not bad
NOt bad...but I just didn't like the ending. I thought it was a bit...err, lame. Maybe make it a little longer and more dramatic. Good start though!
Not bad
NOt bad...but I just didn't like the ending. I thought it was a bit...err, lame. Maybe make it a little longer and more dramatic. Good start though!
Yeh, thats always a problem with doin a flash in one day. The drgs slowly creep into your bloodstream and start to nibble your brai....
Age 33, Male
Student
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Joined on 6/26/04